Um this forum part kinda sounded like a fanfic one so im gonna post mine
~CHAPTER ONE~
-PAIN-
**PAIN WITHOUT LOVE PAIN CANT GET ENOUGH PAIN LIKE IT ROUGH CAUSE I’D RATHER FEEL PAIN THAN NOTHING AT ALL**
The day had just started. Everyone was in the class room and just when Ms. Garrison was about to start her lesson, Dana walked in. She looked bruised, beaten, and was limping. The class fell silent as she trampled over to her seat and sat down. Even Cartman looked concerned. “Um, Dana are you alright?” Ms. Garrison asked. Dana sank into her chair. “I’m fine,” she said in a soft voice. At recess, she was mauled by kids who wanted know what had happened. Dana refused to tell anyone except Kyle, whoms he thought that she could trust the most. She would have told Ivy, but she was home sick that day. “I got beat this morning,” Dana said, she was still speaking softly. “Aw, Dana!” Kyle said. “My mother calls me a failure. She calls me ugly and stupid.” Dana said. “Well, don’t listen to her! She lying. I always thought you were pretty, but I know that Stan thinks your REALLY pretty.” Kyle said and smiled. “What do you mean by that?” Dana asked. “Stan likes you,” Kyle said and got up to go see where Stan was. Dana sat there and thought about things. She thought about all the bad things and good things that have happened to her lately. She counted mostly bad things. Recess was over and all the kids returned to class. The day seemed longer than what it really was. Finally, the bell rang and school was out. Dana’s cel phone rang. She answered it. “Hello?” She said into the phone. It was Kyle, or as he liked to be called, Green Boy. “Hi,” He said.
“Oh, hey,” Dana said. “Whats up with your voice?” Green Boy asked. “uh, soar throat,” Dana said. “Oh ok, well I was just callin to see if I missed anything at school. I just got back from Hawaii. Its so warm there and cold here.” He said. “Nothing really happened.” Dana said. “Ok, well I’ll cya soon,” Green Boy said and hung up the phone. Dana walked up to her house, and stared at it for a while. She was afriad what would happen if she walked in. “Dana, you can come over my house!” Kyle said. “Thanks,” Dana said and smiled. She ran across the street over to Kyle’s house. “So what kind of stuff do you do after school?” Dana asked. “We goof off, and do random stuff,” Kyle said. “We’re lighting cow crap today,” Kyle added. Dana nodded. *This is gonna be a long night* Dana thought
~CHAPTER TWO~
-Long Road to Ruin-** LONG ROAD TO RUIN THERE IN YOUR EYES UNDER THE COLD STREET LIGHT. NO TOMORROW NO DEAD END IN SIGHT** “Wait, whos we?” Dana asked. “Kenny, Stan, and Cartman,” Kyle said. “Cartman?” Dana asked. “Yeah I dont know why, he just comes.” Kyle said and shrugged. There was a knock at the door. “I GOT IT!” Kyle yelled and answered the door. “Hey Dude!” Stan said. “Ok, well I have to pee, be right back!” Kyle said and ran out of the room. “Um, hi Dana,” Stan said shyly. “Hi Stan,” Dana said smiling. There was a long silence. “So, um, hows you and Wendy?” Dana asked. “Not so good.” Stan said. “Aw Why?” Dana asked. “I dont think she likes me anymore.” Stan said. There was another long silence. “hey Guys! I’m back!” Kyle said. “So should we get Kenny and Cartman?” Stan asked. “Not yet, I think we should see how Ivy’s doing,” Kyle said.
VegSyn (4:10:55 PM): Stan and Dana greed. They walked through a couple of yards to get to Ivy’s house. It was gigantic. The three of them knocked on the door. “Oh, why hello Kyle!” Ivy’s mom said. “Hi Mrs. Valmont, is Ivy there?” Kyle asked. “Yes you can come in if you like,” Mrs. Valmont said and went to get Ivy. “Hey guys,” Ivy said. “You don’t look so sick,” Dana said. “I was this morning,” Ivy said. “So can you play?” Stan asked. “Yup!” Ivy said happily. “Ok, now we have to get Cartman and Kenny,” Kyle said. They went up to Cartman’s house and knocked. The door flew open and Cartman ran out screaming. Stan looked inside and was shocked. There, in the center of the room, was the corpse of Liane Cartman. Eric was bawling. Everyone stood there in shock. “WHY GOD?! WHY?!” Cartman screamed.
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~Chapter Three~
-DEAD!-
**Have you heard the news that your dead? No one ever had much nice to say I figure no one liked you anyway Oh take me from the hospital bed Wouldnt it be grand? It aint exactly what you planned and wouldnt it be great if we were all dead**
Just then Sandra came up with tears rolling down her cheeks. "You guys!" She screamed running up to them. '"MY PARENTS! THEIR DEAD!" She yelled. Kyle knew something wasnt right. Without a word he ran to his house. He ran up the stairs and looked for his parents. They were no where to be found. Suspecting the worst, Kyle shed a single tear and ran back out to find everyones parents either gone or dead. There was a meeting called in the community center. "What are we gonna do?" Craig asked out loud. Kyle stood at the podium and cleared his throat. "We will try to make things as normal as possible. We will work, run businesses, and make a living. This is the start of the new South Park!" Kyle said. Everyone was quiet. Then Dana ran up to the podium and said, "I have a dream!" Everyone cheered and applaused, but stopped as Dana was going to continue her soeech. "That we can do what Kyle said. If we all work together!" Everyone cheered more. It was settled. South Park would become an organized town, run by kids.
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Wow. What a good story stanfan! I loved the ending!
it aint done yet!
Chapter Three
Cucumber Song
** I'm a cucumber
I'm a cucumber
I'm a cucumber
I'm a cucumber
I'm a cucumber
I'm a cucumber
...Please don't send me to the mental farm!**
"I volunteer myself to be mayor!" Kyle said. "NO! I wanna be mayor!" Cartman yelled.
"NO ME!"
"NO ME!"
"NO ME!"
"NO ME!"
"SHUT THE HELL UP!" Dana screeched. "PLay rock paper scissors." Ivy said shrugging. "OK! ITS ON!" Cartman said. "BRING IT!" Kyle said.
"Rocl Paper Scissors SHOOT!" Both of them said. "HAH! Paper covers rock!" Cartman said. "WELL ITS BEST OUTTA 3!" Kyle said. "Rock, paper, scissors SHOOT!" Both of them said again. "SCISSORS CUTS PAPER!" Kyle yelled.
"ROCK PAPER SCISSORS SHOOT!" Both of them screamed. "ROCK SMASHES SCISSORS!" KYLE SCREAMED. "I WIN!" "AW GODAMMIT!" Cartman screamed. "UNTIL NEXT TIME!" He ran away. Kyle started jumping and scraeming and howling and having fake seisures.
MEANWHILE ON THE COAST OF HAWAII
"Im sao happy we faked our death!" Mrs. Cartman said. "I know! It gives me so much more me time!" Mrs. Broflovski. "I dunno, I kinda feel wrong about this," Randy said. "Why?!" Sharon said. "Well, their all alone at South Park. And if they do something we'll be responsible so.... OH MY GAWD!! DONUTS!" Randy said aand ran towards the donuts. "I love CRuises," MRs. Cartman said.
Chapter 5
~Nightmares~
1,2 Freddy's coming for you
3,4 better lock your door
5,6 grab a curcifix
7,8 gonna stay up late
9,10 never sleep again
"OK!! Well since how late it is I guess that we should all go and get some sleep." Kyle said after a 6 hour long conference. "Yeah, Im uber tired!" Dana said and yawned. "Hah, sure, you didnt do anything at all during the meeting!: Bebe said smirking. "NO! I suggested a lot of things!" Dana said.
"Ok, sure, Im leaving.....bye Kyle!" She said and walked out the door. "Hey Ivy, wanna see if Stan and Dana could have a sleep over with us?" Kyle asked Ivy. "Yeah, sounds fun!" Ivy said.
~Later that Night~
Everyone was all set up with their sleeping bags. "This is going to be so much fun! One hour later all of them were asleep. Dana woke up to find evryone gone. It was still dark out and no one was in Kyles house. She walked outside to find the whole town empty. As she walked down the street bebe ran up to her covered in blood. Dana freaked out. It looked as if Bebe was screaming but nothing was coming out of her mouth. Everything from then went in slow motion for Dana. A tall figure came up beside Bebe, and stabbed her somehow with his hand. Bebe fell to the ground. Just then Dana woke up screaming. It had been a nightmare. But it had felt so real. "Dana! Are you ok?" Stan asked. Dana rubbed her head a little bit. "Geeze, I bet you woke up the whole neighborhood!" Kyle said. "Very funny," Dana said sarcastically. "Seriously, is everything ok?" Ivy asked. "Yeah, just had a bad dream, I guess." Dana said. The phone rang. "I got it." Kyle said. He answered the phone. He was on the phone for about 1 minute. "Somethings happened!" Kyle said. "What?" Ivy asked. "Something terrible," Kyle said.
~South Park out skirts~
"Stupid Kyle," Cartman said. "MOOO!" Yelled some homeless guy. "SHUT UP!" Cartman yelled at him. Just then he stopped dead. "Theres an evil prescence in South Park. EVEN EVILER THAN ME!?" He said in disbelief. He turned around and headed for South Park.
This is one of the best fanfics ive read in a while!!! Continue it!!
aw thanks............hehe
Chapter Six
-Last Resort-
**Cut my life into peices, this is my last resort! Suffication, no breathing. Dont give a f*ck if I cut my arms bleeding!**
The four of them followed Kyle outside. They ran over to middle of the street where Bebe lay dead. "Woah!" Stan
said. It was so groos Ivy could not look. "Its horrible, who could have done this!" Kyle said loudly. Everyone looked at Dana. "What?! No it wasnt me! I was in bed all night!"
She said. "Are you sure?" Ivy asked. "positive....but the dream. It was like I was here when this happened." Dana said looking down.
"So you did it!" Kyle said. "NO! I saw it happen. I couldnt see the person. All I know is that he has a hat and sharp fingernails, or something on his hands." Dana said. "Your a liar!" Kyle said.
"No I'm not! I'm telling the truth!" Dana said. Kyle walked back to his house, ignoring everything Dana said. Dana went back to her house. No one had belived her. She soon fell asleep again.
"So, no body beleives you? AW how sad," said a taunting voice. "Who is that?" Dana asked. She noticed she was in an old boiler room. She saw something move. Scared, Dana jumped up. "WHO ARE YOU!?" She asked again.
"You should know," The voice said. "Well, I dont! Tell me!" Dana said. "Fine," the voice said. The figure jumped in fron of her. "Freddy's back!" He screamed. Dana woke up that instant. She held her head. "That was scary." She said to herself.
She went downstairs and got herself some coffee.[/b]
Chapter Seven
-One Step Closer-
**Everything you say to me
Takes me one step closer to the edge
And I'm about to break
I need a little room to breathe
Cause I'm one step closer to the edge
And I'm about to break**
"Stan! Don't tell me you belive her!" Kyle scareamed. "Of course I belive her! She wouldn't kill anyone! Ever!
"How can you be so sure of that?" Kyle asked. "Kyle! What the hell has gotten into you!?" Stan asked. "NOTHING!" Kyle yelled. "Ugh, all this arguing is making me
tired." Dana said, drowsily. "I don't care!" Kyle said. "I was't talking to you!" Dana said. Hours later, Dana finally drifted off to sleep.
-Meanwhile-
"Hey Sharon!" Randy said. "yes dear?"Sharon replied. "Look at this," he said and took out his blackberry cell phone. Itw as at the South Park news where it stated that "Bebe Stevens Murdered"
Randy told her parents but they didn't care, they were having such a great time. "Don't worry about it," Sharon said. "Well I can't when our son may- O MY GAWD! BEEEEEEER!" Randy screamed.
-South Park-
Dana was in the boiler room again. "AW goddammit!" She said and got up. "You know 'Freddy' you look pretty scary." She said sarcastically. "Oh sure, sure I'm not scary!" He replied walking out in front
of her. "Your face isn't scary, just REALLY disgusting!" dana said. "I know, I get that a lot." He said. "So, how did you get to so weird?"
Dana woke up just before he answered.